[ Siam Reap, Cambodia 133]
Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would
you go about writing it?
Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand this.
There were three reasons Why I choose to trip the place.
First is I heard that people are so nice,humble and shy. Mostly people are Buddhists as well.
Second is one of the world heritage sites.
There are many old heritage temples. We see magnificent sculptures and statues.
Third is that’s wanted to visit there before the Cambodia government more facilitate as the sightseeing city. It’s developing fast and many hotels and buildings are under constructing.
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[ Siam Reap, Cambodia 133]
Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how wouldyou go about writing it?
Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand this.
There were three reasons why I chose to have a trip to this place.
First is I heard that people are so nice, humble and shy. Most of them are Buddhists as well.
Second is that it is has one of the world heritage sites. There are many old heritage temples. We can see magnificent sculptures and statues.
Third is that I wanted to visit there before the Cambodian government controls more the sightseeing cities. It’s developing fast and many hotels and buildings are under construction.
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