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By watching the news, I knew that there was a teacher who was tired of teaching in the school. She saved up for years to buy a car. For the first time in her life, she became the proud owner of a car. Her resignation letter said that the world is big and she wants to see it. So she carried her money and drove her car and began to travel. For the first two days, she thought the traveling was very funny, but on the third day, when she stopped at the roadside to rest, a car headed for her. She had not noticed until she heard a loud crash. Fortunately, she was miraculously unhurt and promptly called police to deal with the traffic accident.

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By watching the news, I known that there have a teacher with tired of teaching in the school, save up for years to buy a car. For the first time in her life, she became the proud owner of a car.Her resignation better wrote that the world is big and she want to see it.So she carried her money and drived her car began to travel.For the first two days, she think the travel was very funny, but on the third day, when she stopped at the roadside to rest, a car headed for her.She not noticed until heard a loud crash.Fortunately,she was miraculously unhurt and promptly called police to deal with the traffic accidents