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About me I am an engineer specializing in the field of Power Energy. Due to my work experience in various organizations, I have a good understanding of the fundamentals of the organization of work processes, both of large engineering design companies and the production enterprises of power equipment. At my work I always perform as a very responsible and hardworking person and can easily and quickly obtain new skills. I always try to approach my aims relying only on my own possibilities and using honest and open methods. I am sociable and polite. Additionally to my work, I keen on taking photographs and try to lead an active and healthy lifestyle (running, swimming, cycling and gym). I often take part in various thematic meetings and actions connected with the English language.

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About me

I am an engineer specializing in the field of Power Energy. Due to my work experience in various organizations, I have a  (solid/strong)good  (1)understanding of the fundamentals of the organization of work processes, both of large engineering design companies and the production enterprises of power equipment. At my work I always perform as a very responsible and hardworking person and can easily and quickly obtain new skills. I always try to approach my aims (2) goals/tasks/work  relying only on my own possibilities and using honest and open methods. I am sociable and polite.



In addition to Additionally to my work, I am keen on taking photographs and trying to lead an active and healthy lifestyle (running, swimming, cycling and gym). I often take part in various thematic meetings and actions connected with the English language.


(1) Just 2 suggestions. "Good" is very plain.   Solid or Strong are better here.


(2)  Not sure what you mean by aim BUT the 3 words I provide are better professionally.


Very well written.




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