Corrections · 2
The converted plates serve to drill a passage in the wood, and the course itself is cemented with lime.
Maybe use a different word instead of 'course' unless this is a technical term, which in that case leave it.
Perhaps rearrange this line as it is rather long. Either break them up (1) or rearrange them to make it shorter (2). Also remove the first coma. Not sure what the 'insert' functions as here, best to remove it unless it is the name of the mesh.
1) However in reality, only 54 species were caught in commercial bottom trawls with a fine mesh. During 11 years of observations, only 20 were found in large numbers.
2) However in reality, of the 54 species caught in commercial bottom trawls with a fine mesh, only 20 were found in large numbers over a period of 11 years.
Other than that the abstract seems fine.
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