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cold day Taday the weather is so cold, so i think maybe i need to go to my bed earlier. Yestoday i was dated with my friend, wo talked lots of things. She said she also doesn't like her job too, but she doesn't want to resign because she does not know what she want to do. It like so general that we are so confused when we are graduated from school. Yes the school teachs us lots of things, but it doesn't tell me how to do myself and how to do my favorite. Now i am 22, i don't want to do somethings that i don't like and i don't want to waste my time too. Maybe i can try to have a master degree dandidate, but it is very difficult in China becasuse many people want to have it too. Whatever, keep fighting.

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cold day

Taday the weather is so cold, so i think maybe i need to go to my bed earlier.  (I don't know why, but one simply goes to bed, not to their bed.)
Yestoday I was dated went out with my friend, wo talked about lots of things. She said she also doesn't like her job too, but she doesn't want to resign ('resign' is very formal.  You'd probably just say 'quit' in this situation.) because she does not know what she want to do. It like so general that we are so confused when we are graduated from school.  (I don't know what the last sentence means, so I'm not sure how to correct it.  But there's a problem there.)   Yes the school teachs us lots of things, but it doesn't tell me how to do be myself and how to do my favorite things. Now i am 22, i don't want to do some things that i don't like and i don't want to waste my time too either. Maybe i can try to have a master degree dandidate, but it is very difficult in China becasuse many people want to have it too.
Whatever, keep fighting.


This is great!  Keep up the good work, and keep fighting!  You'll find what you love!

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Cold day

Taday the weather is so cold, so I think maybe I need to go to my bed earlier.
Yesterday I was dated went out with my friend, wo we talked about lots of things. She said she also doesn't like her job too, but she doesn't want to resign because she does not know what she want(s) to do. It like so general that We are so confused in general when now that we are have graduated from school. Yes the school teach(es) us lots of things, but it doesn't didn't tell teach me how to do be myself and how to do my favorite things. Now that I am 22, I don't want to do somethings that I don't like and I don't want to waste my time too either. Maybe I can try to have become a master(s) degree dandidate candiate, but it is very difficult in China becasuse many people want to have it be one too.
Whatever, keep fighting.


Remember to capitalise your I's, titles and words at the beginning of sentences... e.g. "Cold day" is not the same as "cold day".

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