8 Jan, 2018
Running to my friend's dorm and hugging her deeply.
Can't say a word.
Back to my place
Wiping rains away from my heart
And continuing to finish my homework.
Like nothing happened.
"Today is an extremly cold day,"
The weather whispered.
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8 Jan, 2018
Running to my friend's dorm and hugging her tightly/closely/deeply.Can't say a word.
Back to my place
Wiping rains away from my heart
and continuing to finish my homework.
like/as though nothing had happened.
"Today is an extremely cold day,"
The weather whispered.
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8 Jan, 2018
Running to my friend's dorm and hugging her deeply.Can't say a word.
Back to my place
Wiping rain
And continuing to finish my homework.
Like nothing happened.
"Today is an extremly cold day,"
The weather whispered.
(I'm reluctant to change even that, though! You're clearly a very talented poet, and an accomplished student of English. This is seriously beautiful!)
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We wish it’s true. Maybe:)
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like nothing happend. is that true? or you just try to make it nothing happend, even your heart still got something like raining.
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