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Making my hometown more appealing to people my age Making my hometown more appealing to people my age When I first moved to Brione, the small town in which I'm currently living, the first thing I noticed was that it seemed to be a very peaceful and nice place. I was 10 years old and I had always loved nature so, when I first saw the woods and all that green and tranquillity, I was enthusiastic and thought it would be the perfect place to live for me. During these years I've spent a lot of time playing in the lawns with my friends and I started to feel a deep connection between me and the surrounding nature. Since I've started the high school, however, I've started to feel the discomfort of living in an isolated place. Now when I want to go out with my friends or hang out through the shops, I always have to organise everything before and I certainly can't do it very often; so, my friends and I have started to think about which changes would make Brione more appealing to people our age. First of all my friends think that a cool bar and a disco would attract many teens but I would personally do something more concrete and feasible such as taking advantage of the location organising excursions or outdoor activities for those who love sport and nature. Besides, we have a small but pretty library that organises a lot of interesting initiatives and it may create projects for young people as well.

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Making my hometown more appealing to people my age

When I first moved to Brione, the small town in which I'm currently living, the first thing I noticed was that it seemed to be a very peaceful and nice place. I was 10 years old and I had always loved nature so, when I first saw the woods and all that green and tranquillity, I was enthusiastic and thought it would be the perfect place to live for me. During these years I've spent a lot of time playing in the lawns with my friends and I started to feel a deep connection between me and the surrounding nature. Since I've started the high school, however, I've started to feel the discomfort of living in an isolated place. Now when I want to go out with my friends or hang out through in the shops, I always have to organise everything before and I certainly can't do it very often; so, my friends and I have started to think about which changes would make Brione more appealing to people our age. First of all my friends think that a cool bar and a disco would attract many teens but I would personally do something more concrete and feasible such as taking advantage of the location organising excursions or outdoor activities for those who love sport and nature. Besides, we have a small but pretty library that organises a lot of interesting initiatives and it may create projects for young people as well.

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