The Three Wise Men are coming!
Today I´m very happy as The Three Wise Men will come at our homes tomorrow. I look like a child even I could say I´m happier than them. Here, in Spain, we hold a ride called "La cabalgata de los Reyes Magos" on the afternoon of 5 January. They and their pajes parade in floats and throw candies to children who run excited to collect as many as possible. But the magic moment happens at midnight when The Three Wise Men get in children´s houses for leaving them a gift. If the children have behaved well during last year, they´ll have what they asked for Magics but, if not, they´ll only have Sweet coal. I´m sure I have had a good behave last year so they´ll probably bring me a good gift (although I would not dislike to eat a bit sweet coal too. It´s really tasty).
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The Three Wise Men are coming!
Today I´m very happy as The Three Wise Men will come at to (or arrive at) our homes tomorrow. I look like a child even though I could say I´m happier than them. Here, in Spain, we hold a ride parade called "La cabalgata de los Reyes Magos" on the afternoon of 5 January. They and their pages parade in floats and throw candies (or sweets) to children who run excitedly to collect as many as possible. But the magic moment happens at midnight when The Three Wise Men get in go into children´s houses for leaving to leave them a gift. If the children have behaved well during the last year, they´ll have what they asked the Magi for Magics (or what they asked for from the Magi) but, if not, they´ll only have sweet coal. I´m sure I have had a good behave behaviour last year so they´ll probably bring me a good gift (although I would not dislike to eat eating a bit of sweet coal too. It´s really tasty).Well done Cristina! Corrections in red and suggestions to sound more natural in blue and grey.
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Today I'm very happy because The Three Wise Men will come at our homes tomorrow. I look like a child even I could say I´m happier than them (sorry, I do not understand what this sentence is trying to say). Here, in Spain, we hold a ride called "La cabalgata de los Reyes Magos" on the afternoon of 5 January. They and their pajes parade in floats throw candy to children who run excited to collect as many as possible. But the magic moment happens at midnight when The Three Wise Men get in children´s houses to leave them a gift. If the children have behaved well during last year, they´ll have what they asked for but if not, they´ll only have Sweet coal. I´m sure I have behaved well last year so they´ll probably bring me a good gift (although I would not dislike to eat a bit sweet coal too. It´s really tasty).
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