A wonderful holiday I have had
Last year I went on holiday to Lebanon. I went with my family. It was a package deal and cost us $ 1,000. We stayed in a luxurious hotel overlooking the beach in Beirut. It had a swimming pool, two tennis courts and a big restaurant. On the first day, we hired a taxi to do some sightseeing. In the evening we went to markets and malls to do some shopping. Another day we took a ferry on a wonderful tour in the sea.On the last day, we visited Baalbek and its temples. We weren’t bored for a moment.The atmosphere was peaceful. The people were friendly and helpful to tourists. It was a fantastic holiday we shall never forget it.
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A wonderful holiday I have had
Last year I went with my family on holiday to Lebanon. I went with my family. It was a package deal and cost us $ 1,000. We stayed in a luxurious hotel overlooking the beach in Beirut. It had a swimming pool, two tennis courts and a big restaurant. On the first day, we hired a taxi to do some sightseeing. In the evening we went to markets and malls to do some shopping. Another day we took a ferry for a wonderful tour on the sea. On the last day, we visited Baalbek and its temples. We weren’t bored for a moment.The atmosphere was peaceful. The people were friendly and helpful to tourists. It was a fantastic holiday, we shall never forget it.0
Great English!! I would just delete the last "it". Best Regards!
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Great writing. Only the final phrase needs correcting. The final "it" should be removed, or the sentence should end: "holiday and we shall never forget it."
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Thank you so much, Elizabeth Hardman.
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Good job sounds great!
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