What kind of traveling do you like?
When I was young, I liked to travel on my own. My first oversea traveling was to go to Singapore. I was curious for everything during flight. I remember I required flight attendants to refill wine for three times, because it was free. I did enjoy traveling on my own. I checked out the map of guide-book to get to anywhere I like to visit. It looks like a complete adventure. Everything is new and fantastic, for example, language, culture, people and so on. There were so many things I could learn. I am curious for this world. The passion is my power.
After I got married, I liked to travel by joining tours. I and my wife have to look after two kids. You may image how many things you have to do to travel with two kids. But, the tours provide me an easy way to enjoy traveling. I don't worry about hotel, transport, food, sightseeing, shopping, and something like that. So, I get much more time to be with my family. It is really convenient.
Currently, I am getting older. But, I still have passion to travel around the world. And learing English is my first step to begin this adventure.
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What kind of traveling do you like?
When I was young, I liked to travel on my own. My first over sea traveling ( you could try and use other words such as adventure , holiday or getaway was to go to Singapore. I was curious for about everything (everything, like what? the food, the people, you can add expand how you felt during that on your flight) during flight. I remember I required requested flight attendants to refill wine for three times, because it was free. I did enjoy traveling on my own. I checked out the map of guide-book to see how to get to anywhere locations I would like to visit. It looks like a complete other suggestions of words that describe your upcoming holiday could be adjectives- like amazing, breath-taking, awesome, exciting) adventure. Everything is was (past tense since you are talking about a past holiday) new and fantastic, for example, language, culture, people and so on. There were so many things I could learn. I am curious for this world. The passion is my power. - I want to find out more about the world we live in and it's my passion that drives to think and feel this way. - it that what you mean?
After I got married, I liked to travel by joining tours. I and my wife My wife and I have to look after two kids, you may image how many things you have to do to travel with two kids. But, the tours provide me an easy way to enjoy traveling. I don't worry about hotel, transport, food, sightseeing, shopping. and something like that. So, I get much more time to be with my family, which it is really convenient.
Currently, I am getting older, but I still have passion to travel around the world. And learing learning English is my first step to begin this adventure.
Thank you for your reading and help to correct the mistakes.
Thank you very much.
Hello, I hope this helps. good job, keep it up :)
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