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Shopping I went shopping to a near shopping moll today. I wanted to buy climbing shoes, but I can’t find good ones. When I was going to go back my home, I found a outdoor shop and entered it. A saleswoman talked to me. she was very nice and she knew about their product very well. I feel her love for their product. I bought a pair of climbing shoes and a backpack.

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Nice job! You used a variety of tenses to talk about what you did today which is not easy! 

Just a couple of corrections for you,...please see below :-) 


Shopping

I went shopping at a nearby shopping mall today.
I wanted to buy climbing shoes, but I couldn't find good ones.
When I was going to go back my home, I found an outdoor shop and entered it.
A saleswoman talked to me.
she was very nice and she knew a lot about their product very well. OR she knew their product very well.

I felt her love for their product.

I bought a pair of climbing shoes and a backpack.

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Shopping

I went shopping to a near shopping moll today.
I wanted to buy climbing shoes, but I can’t find good ones.
When I was going to go back my home, I found a outdoor shop and entered it.
A saleswoman talked to me.
she was very nice and she knew about their product very well.
I feel her love for their product.
I bought a pair of climbing shoes and a backpack.


I went to a nearby shopping mall today.

I wanted to buy climbing shoes, but I couldn't find good ones.

On my way home, I found an outdoor shop and entered it.

A saleswoman talked to me.

She was very nice, and knew about their product very well (you can also say "very knowledgeable")

I felt her love for their product.

I bought a pair of climbing shoes and a backpack.

よかったですね!ハイキングとか好きですか?

英語で書くとき、最初過去形で書き始めたらずっと過去形を使った方がいいです。それで「can」を「could」に、「feel」も「felt」に変えました。

これからも頑張ってください!



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