Corrections · 4
Nice job! You used a variety of tenses to talk about what you did today which is not easy!
Just a couple of corrections for you,...please see below :-)
Shopping
I wanted to buy climbing shoes, but I couldn't find good ones.
When I was going to go back my home, I found an outdoor shop and entered it.
A saleswoman talked to me.
she was very nice and she knew a lot about their product very well. OR she knew their product very well.
I felt her love for their product.
I bought a pair of climbing shoes and a backpack.
Shopping
I went shopping to a near shopping moll today.I wanted to buy climbing shoes, but I can’t find good ones.
When I was going to go back my home, I found a outdoor shop and entered it.
A saleswoman talked to me.
she was very nice and she knew about their product very well.
I feel her love for their product.
I bought a pair of climbing shoes and a backpack.
I went to a nearby shopping mall today.
I wanted to buy climbing shoes, but I couldn't find good ones.
On my way home, I found an outdoor shop and entered it.
A saleswoman talked to me.
She was very nice, and knew about their product very well (you can also say "very knowledgeable")
I felt her love for their product.
I bought a pair of climbing shoes and a backpack.
よかったですね!ハイキングとか好きですか?
英語で書くとき、最初過去形で書き始めたらずっと過去形を使った方がいいです。それで「can」を「could」に、「feel」も「felt」に変えました。
これからも頑張ってください!
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