I wrote a few sentences, could you correct them please?
I drank twice vodka's drenchs last week with my friends. We went out together every saturday night.
Our computer have died and my hard drive is full. I need another of each contents.
The Brasilian's Navy call three squads to drive 2 ships and 1 sailboat at now.
Unluckly, her grandmother was busy and her father was at his business.
I want to take a trip at this carnival to João Pessoa, Paraíba. But I think my family isn't going anywhere since prices have risen from last night to here!
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I wrote a few sentences, could you correct them please?
I drank vodka's drenches twice last week with my friends. We go out together every Saturday night.In this sentence, because you are using 'every Saturday night', it is a habit or routine and you should use the present simple.
Our computer has died and my hard drive is full. I need to copy the contents.
The Brazilian Navy called three crews to sail 2 ships and 1 sailboat now.
Unluckily, her grandmother was busy and her father was at his business.
I want to take a trip to João Pessoa, Paraíba for carnival. But I think my family isn't going anywhere since the prices have risen from last night to now!
Hello Sara,
I think I have corrected your sentences correctly in agreement with your original meaning. If anything is not clear, please let me know.
Best wishes
Bob
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