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Speaking about my professional life
I've studied pharmacy and now, I'm a pharmacist. I'm working in a pharmacy with other three partners / colleagues (?). I've finished my studies at in September of the last year and now I'm thinking about to continue continuing my studies. I would like to make a master a do a masters in Barcelona or Madrid but I'm not really sure to leave my city and move on there / go there (either is OK).Barcelona is a beautiful and expensive city (better: beautiful but expensive), it's a very multicultural and modern city, the weather is very well nice and my friends talk very well of her it.
Madrid is beautiful too , it's also very expensive and a big city, but I think that I would like to live there. I know a lot of people who lives in Madrid, they are a very good friends.
I don't already yet know about what I will do next year, but I only know that I want continue my formation like training as a pharmacist in an industrial area of pharmacy.
I hope to choose the correct way.
Very good Marina. My corrections are in red and suggestions to sound more natural in blue and grey.
"partners / colleagues" - Partners implies that you each own a part of the business. Colleagues implies that you work together as employees of the pharmacy.
About My Professional Life
I've studied pharmacy and now I'm a pharmacist. I'm working in a pharmacy with three other co-workers. I've finished my studies in September of the last year and now I'm thinking about continuing my studies. I would like to take/get a masters at/in Barcelona or Madrid but I'm not really sure I want to leave my city and move/go there.Barcelona is a beautiful and expensive city, it's very multicultural and modern, the weather is very good and my friends talk very well of it.
Madrid is beautiful too, it's also very expensive and a big city*, but I think that I would like to live there. I know a lot of people who live in Madrid, they are a very good friends.
I still don't know about what I will do next year, but I only know that I want to continue my career as a pharmacist in an industrial area of pharmacy.
I hope to choose the correct way.
* Or: "very expensive and big, ".
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