The first day of the new year
The day of today should considered the lazy day. All the people have hangover today and stay of their houses sleeping, watching series on Netflix and watching people in social networking! It's impressing how the people stay happies in this time of the year. My desire to this year is that people remember of their families and friends all the time!
Happy new year to all!
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Today was considered a lazy day. Everyone slept in as they were hungover. Some were binge watching Netflix while others scrolled through their social media pages. It's 1) interesting how people kept themselves 2) entertained during this time of the year. My 3) wish this year would be for people to constantly have their families and friends on their minds. Happy new year to all!
1- I think you meant this interesting instead of impressive. Impressive means evoking admiration through size, quality, or skill; grand, imposing, or awesome while interesting means arousing curiosity or interest; holding or catching the attention. Either ways both are acceptable depending on what you meant.
2- Since the sentences before were all about ways in which people choose to entertain themselves, i think entertain is a more appropriate word.
3- You can use desire too but it is better if you wrote wish instead. If you want to use the word desire, you can write "My desired outcome is....")
Sorry if misinterpreted you. If you have any questions, feel free to drop me a message but just saying, my english ain't perfect :D
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Parabéns! Muito bom. Faça mais escrever.
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The first day of the new year
The day of Today should or "can" be considered the a lazy day. All the Many people have hangovers today and stay of in their houses sleeping, watching series on Netflix and watching (touching base or talking or texting) with people in on social networking! It's impressing impressive (not sure if this is what you mean) how the people stay happies happy during in this time of the year. My desire to for this year is that people remember of their families and friends all the time! or people always remember of their families and friends.Happy new year to all!
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