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I took a bath in the snow. Today was very cold and snowy day, so I wanted to warm my self. I went to public baths. There is natural hot spring at two bath tubs in the open air. After that I drink a beer in my house. It is most comfortable time in my days.

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I took a bath in the snow.

Today was a very cold and snowy day, so I wanted to warm myself and went to the public baths. There there is natural hot spring and two bath tubs in the open air. After that I drank a beer in my house. It was the most comfortable time of my day.

Very well written!

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