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A sobbing 2017 welcomes a roaring 2018! It's true that time flies with the blinks of our eyes. Today, this time we were celebrating the New Year 2017 and now we are welcoming 2018 by giving farewell to 2017 remembering and encapsulating all that we did, people we met, languages we learned, things we couldn't do, smiles, sorrow, rejoice, regret and so on... For some people, it was proved to be the best year and for some others, it was the worst year ever. Despite it was good or bad for me/you/others, time will still run at its true pace without looking back. So, why should we sit morning looking back what we couldn't do or what it made our life like? It is for sure that it is not going to give any damn to what we feel, so why to sit on a couch and recalling the sad parts it left behind and why not to go out of our home and scream with joy with a new hope? I met so many nice people here who for sure left a great impression in my mind and heart which will stay with me the rest of my life. So, let me wrap the best parts that I have with me and celebrate for being blessed with such awesome experiences. Yes, some people come and go, but they, for sure, make a special place in our heart which is more than what we have ever expected. Now here in my place, people are roaring like the tiger in the jungle and the firecrackers are making the sky goes wild with dazzling lights. I hope it would be the same in every part of the world! So, let me conclude by wishing you all a beautiful and brilliant happy New Year. Just wrap the good memories and be prepared to fill all those memory space with some really great things that you are going to experience in this 2018. Keep smiling:)

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Good job!  Mostly minor corrections.  I'm pretty certain you didn't mean to use the word 'warp' though.  But I couldn't figure out what you were trying to say.  And at the end, I changed 'fill all those memory space' to 'make room for', I think that's what you were trying to say. 

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A sobbing 2017 welcomes a roaring 2018!

It's true that time flies with the blink of our eyes. Last year at this time we were celebrating the New Year of 2017 and now we are welcoming 2018 and giving farewell to 2017.  We are remembering and encapsulating all that we did, people we met, languages we learned, things we couldn't do, smiles, sorrow, rejoice, regret and so on...  For some people, it was the best year and for some others, it was the worst year ever. Whether it was good or bad for me/you/others, time will still run at its true pace without looking back. So, why should we sit mourning and looking back at what we couldn't do or what it made our life like? It is certain that it is not going to give a damn to what we feel, so why sit on a couch and recalling the sad parts left behind and why not go out of our home and scream with joy with a new hope?

I met so many nice people here who left a great impression in my mind and heart which will stay with me the rest of my life. So, let me warp the best parts that I have with me and celebrate for being blessed with such awesome experiences. Yes, some people come and go, but they, for sure, make a special place in our heart which is more than what we have ever expected.


Now here in my place, people are roaring like the tiger in the jungle and the firecrackers are making the sky goes wild with dazzling lights. I hope it would be the same in every part of the world!


So, let me conclude by wishing you all a beautiful and brilliant happy New Year. Just warp the good memories and be prepared to make room for some really great things that you are going to experience in this 2018.


Keep smiling:)

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Sudeep, I thought maybe you meant 'wrap' but I wasn't sure.
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Such a nice message !

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