The Third Subject: Pondering Upon the World's General Affairs
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The Third Subject: Pondering Upon the World's General Affairs
Pondering upon the general nature of the world prevents a mystical traveler from being involved in matters that are not important. A mystical traveler if always dedicates their thought to the existence and general affairs like contemplating the creation of the sky, the earth, the reality of the soul, and similar. Hense, they will no longer pay attention to their limited desires of their soul. Therefore, they would absolutely cut themselves off their deceiving passions and desires.
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The Third Subject: Pondering Upon the World's General Affairs (the word pondering doesn't take a preposition like "upon")
The Third Subject: Pondering Upon the World's General Affairs
Pondering upon the general nature of the world prevents a mystical traveler from being involved in matters that are not important. A mystical traveler if always dedicates their thought to the existence and general affairs, like contemplating the creation of the sky, the earth, the reality of the soul, and similar topics. Hence, they will no longer pay attention to their limited desires of their soul. Therefore, they would absolutely cut themselves off from their deceiving passions and desires.
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The Third Subject: Pondering Upon the World's General Affairs
Hi, I would be thankful to anyone who please check my translation and correct it in Grammar, Punctuations, Proper Words etc. Thank you.The Third Subject: Pondering Upon the World's General Affairs
Pondering upon the general nature of the world prevents a mystical traveler (traveller) from being involved in matters that are not important. A mystical traveler (traveller) if always dedicates their thought to the existence and general affairs like contemplating the creation of the sky, the earth, the reality of the soul, and similar. Hense, (hence) they will no longer pay attention to their limited desires of their soul. Therefore, they would absolutely cut themselves off their deceiving passions and desires.
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