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ICTs or TICs I need someone who can correct this phrases plis: -Conjunto de tecnologías desarrolladas para gestionar información y enviarla de un lugar a otro. They are a technology combination developed to manage information and sent it from one place to another. -Conjunto de herramientas o recursos de tipo tecnológico y comunicacional, que sirven para facilitar la emisión, acceso y tratamiento de la información mediante códigos variados que pueden corresponder a textos, imágenes, sonidos, entre otros. They are a tool´s combination which they are good for facilitate the transmission, access and treatment of information through a variety codes as texts, images, sounds, etc. -Son todas las tecnologías que permiten acceder, producir, guardar, presentar y transferir información. They are technologies which they allows to access, produce, save, present and transfer information. -Permite el intercambio de datos e información de forma rápida y en todas las partes del planeta It allows data and information exchange in a faster way in all world´s parts. -En la actualidad, están en todos los ámbitos de la vida social, familiar y escolar. Sus usos son ilimitados y pueden manejarse con facilidad, sin necesidad de ser un experto. En este sentido, ahora encontramos dispositivos y aplicaciones dirigidos a mercados cada vez más específicos, como TIC para educación, para salud o para grandes empresas, por ejemplo. Nowadays, ICTs are in every society´s fields, as social, family and school life. Their uses are ilimited and they can manage easily. We can found device and applications set off to specific markets as ICTs for education, health, etc. -En los últimos años, las TIC han tomado un papel importantísimo en nuestra sociedad y se utilizan en multitud de actividades. Nowadays, ICTs has became very important in our society and we use it in a lot of activities.

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ICTs or TICs

I need someone who can correct this phrases plis:

-Conjunto de tecnologías desarrolladas para gestionar información y enviarla de un lugar a otro.
They are a technology combination developed to manage information and sent it from one place to another.

-A set of technologies developed to manage information and send it from one place to another.



-Conjunto de herramientas o recursos de tipo tecnológico y comunicacional, que sirven para facilitar la emisión, acceso y tratamiento de la información mediante códigos variados que pueden corresponder a textos, imágenes, sonidos, entre otros.
They are a tool´s combination which they are good for facilitate the transmission, access and treatment of information through a variety codes as texts, images, sounds, etc.

- A Set of tools or technological or communication resources which serve to facilitate the issuance, access and processing of information through various codes corresponding to texts, images, and sounds, among others.


-Son todas las tecnologías que permiten acceder, producir, guardar, presentar y transferir información.
They are technologies which they allows to access, produce, save, present and transfer information.

These are technologies which facilitate the access, production, protecting, presenting and transfer of information.

-Permite el intercambio de datos e información de forma rápida y en todas las partes del planeta
It allows data and information exchange in a faster way in all world´s parts.

-Allowing the exchange of data and information quickly and in all parts of the planet



-En la actualidad, están en todos los ámbitos de la vida social, familiar y escolar. Sus usos son ilimitados y pueden manejarse con facilidad, sin necesidad de ser un experto. En este sentido, ahora encontramos dispositivos y aplicaciones dirigidos a mercados cada vez más específicos, como TIC para educación, para salud o para grandes empresas, por ejemplo.
Nowadays, ICTs are in every society´s fields, as social, family and school life. Their uses are ilimited and they can manage easily. We can found device and applications set off to specific markets as ICTs for education, health, etc.

-Today, they are in all areas of social, family and school life. Their uses are unlimited and can be handled easily, without the need to be an expert. In this sense, we now find devices and applications aimed at increasingly specific markets, such as ICT for education, health or for large companies.


-En los últimos años, las TIC han tomado un papel importantísimo en nuestra sociedad y se utilizan en multitud de actividades.

-In recent years, ICT's have taken on an important role in our society and are used in a multitude of applications.

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ICTs or TICs

I need someone who can correct these phrases please:

-Conjunto de tecnologías desarrolladas para gestionar información y enviarla de un lugar a otro.
> [A] combination of technologies [which have been] developed [in order to] to manage and transmit information.

-Conjunto de herramientas o recursos de tipo tecnológico y comunicacional, que *sirven* para facilitar la emisión, acceso y tratamiento de la información mediante **códigos variados** que pueden corresponder a textos, imágenes, sonidos, entre otros.
>> [A] set of technologies and communication tools for digitally transmitting, accessing and processing information -- including text, images and audio -- by means of **various programs**.

-Son todas las tecnologías que permiten acceder, producir, guardar, presentar y transferir información.
>> [They/these/those are] all technologies which enable information access, production, storage, presentation and transmission.

-Permite el intercambio de datos e información de forma rápida y en todas las partes del planeta
>> [It] enables [the] fast global exchange of data and information.

-En la actualidad, están en todos los ámbitos de la vida social, familiar y escolar. Sus usos son ilimitados y pueden manejarse con facilidad, sin necesidad de ser un experto. En este sentido, ahora encontramos dispositivos y aplicaciones dirigidos a mercados cada vez más específicos, como TIC para educación, para salud o para grandes empresas, por ejemplo.
>> Today, ITC can be found in every area of social, family, and school life. The/its applications are limitless and can be easily manged without expertise. [Thus,] today we're seeing devices and applications in increasingly specific markets such as education, healthcare, or enterprise. 

-En los últimos años, las TIC han tomado un papel importantísimo en nuestra sociedad y se utilizan en multitud de actividades.
>> In recent years TIC has played an important role in society and is being used in many ways.

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I've rewritten your text with the type of English we typically use in IT.

* Although in castellano you use the 3rd person plural, in English it's more natural to use the 3rd person singular when talking about a technology, or (in this case) a group of technologies.

** The phrase códigos variados is difficult to translate directly, because the English word "code" (in the context of information technology) is just the written representation of a computer program -- "code" can't actually do anything because it just refers to the written text and symbols. I think adding the word "digital" (or "digitally") makes your meaning clear.



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