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Writing5 Today, you can see products everywhere. Have you ever thought the process? every product need to be built in the factory and it is necessary to make them. If companies built a factory near your community, what will happen to your society? Building a factory have many risks such as pollution, noise and so on. Especially, pollution has serious disadvantages in our environment . For example, In 1990`s, Minamata city in japan had the factory which produced metal and they released various metals into sea. it effected children there and the some children didn`t have a leg or a hand when they were born because metal pollution disturbs baby`s growing. It was social issue in Japan. To be sure, the economy of your community will be greatly improved by building the factory because starting the factory need to be hiring people by paying salary. some towns in Japan had the same things that are building nuclear reactor for generating electricity and some of the towns permitted electric company to build it. As results, the serious economic problem which the town had was solved. Comparing to the advantage and disadvantage, the merit is a little but the disadvantage is a deadly and a quite huge. To sum up, I disagree with building a factory near my community.

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Today, you can see products everywhere. Have you ever thought the processes behind them? Every product needs to be built in a factory and it is necessary to make them. If companies built a factory near your community, what would happen to your society?


Building a factory has many risks such as pollution, noise and so on. Especially, pollution has serious disadvantages in our environment . For example, In the 1990`s, Minamata city in japan had the factory which produced metal and they released various metals into sea. It affected children there and some children were born without a leg or a hand  because metal pollution disturbs baby`s growth. It was social issue in Japan.

To be sure, the economy of your community will be greatly improved by building the factory because it will generate jobs. Some towns in Japan had the same things that are building nuclear reactor for generating electricity and some of the towns permitted electric company to build it. As results, the serious economic problem which the town had was solved.

Comparing the advantages and disadvantages, the merit is a little but the disadvantage is deadly and quite huge. To sum up, I disagree with building a factory near my community.

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