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The injury of World War II World War II broke out in September 1.1939.The human body and spirit have been great hurt in this war.

During the war,numerous people displaced.Numerous women lose their husbands,sons,even lost their home and be treated badly.Thousands of soldiers were sacrificed for the war.

Countless houses and exquisite buildings were burned by a ruthless fire.Human civilization has been destroyed unprecedentedly .

Who is the most injured crowd in the war?It is no doubt the children.Especially Jewish children .They are innocent but they were brutally persecuted by the Nazis.

Many children,unfortunately,became orphans,lost their parents love.

Time can't cure these wounds.Only with the passage of time disappear in the river of history

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The injury of World War II

World War II broke out in on September 1. , 1939. The human body and spirit have been great greatly hurt in by this war.

During the war, numerous people were displaced. Numerous women lose lost their husbands, sons. Some even lost their home homes and be were treated badly.Thousands of soldiers were sacrificed for the war.

Countless houses and exquisite buildings were burned by a ruthless fire.Human civilization has been destroyed unprecedentedly .

Who is the most injured crowd in  Who has been most injured by the war?It is no doubt the children, especially Jewish children .They are innocent but they were brutally persecuted by the Nazis.

Many children,unfortunately,became orphans,lost their parents love. Unfortunately, many children lost their parents, becoming orphans.   

Time can't cure these wounds.Only with the passage of time, they might disappear in the river of history

(This is my homework!)

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.... Good writing!  Keep up the good work.

Have a great day,  Anita


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