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Password We all have several accountants that requires password to login in. In China, the mostly frequently used passwords were Wechat and QQ’s password. With the developing of the new functions of these two social media software, their passwords become more and more important, now we even l use them for managing our money, to pay our bills. QQ and Wechat passwords are now the main target for hackers. We are very often to get some message from our closed friends’ Wechat or QQ, here are some examples: 1. I am your father or mother, I had a car accident a few minutes ago, Now I am in hospital, My phone was broken in the crashes, doctors says that I need a surgery immediately, Please send me 5000 Yuan as soon as possible. 2. Hi, I lost my purse on my way home, and my phone is about to run out of money, please charge me 200 Yuan, and I will pay you back when I get home. 3. This is my bank accounts: ********, please deposit 1000 Yuan before 2:00. Your mom. ……… When you get this kind of messages which are involved in money, be aware, you need to make a phone call and talk to your friends directly, to ensure that one who sent your message were your real friends, most of time, they are hackers, because your friends social media accounts were broke down by them. Some of the passwords are very easy to be deciphered. These are the top worst passwords below: 123456, Mercedes, Volkswagen, 11111……. There is no absolute secure password in the world, as a networking technician I have some tips for making your passwords safer: 1: Having more letters in your passwords, making your passwords as long as possible; 2: Having various combinations in your passwords, for example, adding words in capital and lower letter at same time, put numbers, letters, punitions and special symbols in your passwords, more complicated and safer. 3: don’t use the repeating letters and numbers, don’t use the characters or numbers in a row. ………. Do you have any other tips? You are welcome to share it with me below.

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We all have several accounts that require password to login in.

In China, the most frequently used passwords were(are) Wechat and QQ. With the development of the new functions of these two social media (software), password protections become very strong now a days we all use them for managing our money for paying bills ,online money transfer etc. (QQ and Wechat passwords are now the main target for hackers.)So as a result a group of unauthorized people will try to break into our accounts.




It's not uncommon to  get some messages from our close friends in Wechat or QQ.Here are some examples:

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1. I am your father or mother, I had a car accident a few minutes ago, Now I am in hospital, My phone was broken in the crashes, doctors says that I need a surgery immediately, Please send me 5000 Yuan as soon as possible.
2. Hi, I lost my purse on my way home, and my phone is about to run out of money, please charge me 200 Yuan, and I will pay you back when I get home.
3. This is my bank accounts: ********, please deposit 1000 Yuan before 2:00. Your mom.

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@I'm not correcting the above paragraph cause it's your personal preference.
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When you get this kind of messages which(that) are involved with money be aware and make a call  to your friends directly to ensure that one who sent your message was  your real friend .Most of time they are hackers (because your friends social media accounts were broke down by them.) 

Some of the passwords are vulnerable. (These are like ::::
123456, Mercedes, Volkswagen, 11111…….)

@above paragraph is unnecessary


There is no absolute secure password in the world, as a networking technician I have some tips for making your passwords safer:
1: Having more letters in your passwords, making your passwords as long as possible;

@Make sure your password contains more than ...words with alphanumeric character.



2: Having various combinations in your passwords, for example, adding words in capital and lower letter at same time, put numbers, letters, punitions and special symbols in your passwords, more complicated and safer.
3: don’t use the repeating letters and numbers, don’t use the characters or numbers in a row.
……….
Do you have any other tips? You are welcome to share it with me below.


My suggestions:

1. Use proper tense with simple world
2. Check your writing at least 5 times 

Overall writing was good but need to work on your spelling.


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You wrote it best ... Good notebook . Meaningful to read.

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