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Excursion to Seville Purposes of the trip From 20th to 22nd November I was on holidays and I decided to travel to Seville. The purpose of my visit was to know the most important monuments and places and to attend to a flamenco spectacle. What I did The first day I did a sightseeing tour and I saw the Cathedral, the Giralda and the Real Alcázares. What I liked more of the Cathedral was its pictures and sculptures. I liked the Giralda because of its incredible views and I loved the mudéjar art of the Real Alcázares. The second day I visited the Spain Square and the Maria Luisa Park. The Spain Square is big and amazing with a nice fountain in the middle and the Maria Luisa Park has awesome centenary trees. The third day, during the morning I walked around the Guadalquivir River and I saw the Gold Tower; and during the afternoon I attended to a flamenco spectacle. The dancers were passionate and I felt thrilled. Comments My trip to Seville was excellent because all the activities were interesting and well planned. I enjoyed Seville very much. I encourage you to visit this lovely city.

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Excursion to Seville

Purposes of the trip
From 20th to 22nd November I was on holidays and I decided to travel to Seville. The purpose of my visit was to get to know the most important monuments and places, and to attend a flamenco spectacle.

What I did
The first day I did a sightseeing tour and I saw the Cathedral, the Giralda and the Real Alcázares. What I liked most about the Cathedral was its pictures and sculptures. I liked the Giralda because of its incredible views and I loved the mudéjar art of the Real Alcázares.

The second day I visited the Spain Square and the Maria Luisa Park. The Spain Square is big and amazing with a nice fountain in the middle and the Maria Luisa Park has awesome centenary trees.

The third day, during the morning I walked around the Guadalquivir River and I saw the Gold Tower; and during the afternoon I attended a flamenco spectacle. The dancers were passionate, and I was thrilled.

Comments
My trip to Seville was excellent because all the activities were interesting and well planned. I enjoyed Seville very much. I encourage you to visit this lovely city.
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Excursion to Seville

Purposes of the trip
From 20th to 22nd November I was on holidays and I decided to travel to Seville. The purpose of my visit was to visit  the most important monuments and places and to attend to a flamenco spectacle.

What I did
The first day I did a sightseeing tour and I saw the Cathedral, the Giralda and the Real Alcázares. What I liked most about the Cathedral was its pictures and sculptures. I liked the Giralda because of its incredible views and I loved the mudéjar art of the Real Alcázares.

The second day I visited the Spain Square and the Maria Luisa Park. The Spain Square is big and amazing with a nice fountain in the middle and the Maria Luisa Park has awesome centenary trees.

The third day, in the morning  I walked around the Guadalquivir River and I saw the Gold Tower; and in the afternoon I attended to a flamenco spectacle. The dancers were passionate and I felt thrilled. (you could also say: On the third morning, I....  and in the afternoon, I ...)

Comments
My trip to Seville was excellent because all the activities were interesting and well planned. I enjoyed Seville very much. I encourage you to visit this lovely city.

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