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I'm confused about... Hello friends, Please help me for correct/correcting below sentences. The situation is we should ship the products to the customer on 12/28.. 1. Hi BOSS, We got customer's delivery request on 12/28,and it will exceed/exceeding the allocation, Will you approve this delivery request? or Would you approve this delivery request? 2.OK, We will change/changing the quantity to 1ea, thank you.

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I'm confused about...

Hello friends,
Please help me [correct/with correcting] the sentences below.
The situation is we are supposed to ship the products to the customer on 12/28..

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Hi BOSS,
We got the customer's delivery request on 12/28,and it will exceed/exceeding the allocation,
Will you approve this delivery request?
or
Would you approve this delivery request?

(I think that either is fine with different nuances. The first one sounds okay, the second one gives the impression of asking for a favour. I would go with "Will you approve this delivery request?")

2.OK, We will change/changing the quantity to 1ea, thank you.
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Thank you so much. You are right! The product will be ship on 12/28...
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We got "the" customer's delivery request on 12/28,and it will exceed/exceeding the allocation If it's not 12/28 now, i am thinking you mean that you want to send the delivery on 12/28 So "delivery request for 12/28" because you want to send it on that date.

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