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Workers for my proyect General Management and commercial advisor, he is also the administrator of the company; Organizes and coordinates the team, and the weddings hired. It is in charge of conducting the meetings to look for new strategies and to be up to date, it investigates market analysis every 6 months. It also makes an interesting weekly article to hang on the web and supervises it. He is also commercial advisor to the northern region of the Valencian Community and does the same as the hired consultant. Commercial advisor; It has assigned the South Zone of the Valencian Community, negotiates commissions with the restaurants and farmhouses and advises the boyfriends of the area interested in hiring the services, worries about knowing the details that the bride and groom want and in the meeting with direction what It will move for the proper management of the Organization. It will accompany the bride and groom on the day designated to leave everything perfect, it takes care of the organization of the decoration. Administration, Marketing and human resources; It carries the accounting and the Department of Human Resources, manages the payment and collection of the services received and rendered and the payrolls and payments to the employees and the partners. It answers the emails and the calls of the interested ones and organizes the quotations of the commercials. Manages and hires the professionals who collaborate with us, such as limousines and luxury cars, wedding dress shops, etc. Take the website with direction. Extra, versatile person; Hired for the weekends to carry the van with the necessary material, to carry out assembly and dismantling.

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Workers for my project

General Management and commercial advisor, he is also the administrator of the company; Organizes and coordinates the team, and the weddings hired contracted. It Is in charge of conducting the meetings to look for new strategies and to be up to date, it Investigates market analysis every 6 months. It Also makes creates an interesting weekly article to hang post on the web and supervises it. He is also commercial advisor to the northern region of the Valencian Community and does the same as the hired consultant.
Commercial advisor; It has Is assigned the South Zone of the Valencian Community, negotiates commissions with the restaurants and farmhouses and advises the (boyfriends of the area)?? interested in hiring the services, worries about knowing the details that the bride and groom want and in the strategy meeting with direction what It will move for the proper management of the Organization. It Will accompany the bride and groom on the day designated to leave everything perfect, it takes care of the organization of the decoration.
Administration, Marketing and human resources; It carries Oversees the accounting and the Department of Human Resources, manages the payment and collection of the services received and rendered and the payrolls and payments to the employees and the partners. It Answers the emails and the calls of the interested ones and organizes the quotations of the commercials. Manages and hires the professionals who collaborate with us, such as limousines and luxury cars, wedding dress shops, etc. Take the website with direction Owns the strategy for the website.
Extra, versatile person; Hired for the weekends to carry drive the van with the necessary material, to carry out assembly and dismantling.


Well done Vanessa! Corrections in red and suggestions to sound more natural in blue and grey. Note: When writing a job description such as this, it's very common to omit the subject (He, she, etc.). So instead of writing "He/She manages a team of people" or "This role will manage a team of people", it's very common just to see "Manages a team of people, is responsible for maintaining the website...", etc. 

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