A short story Try to write a short story to practice my grammar and tense, please help me to correct it and make it more natural. One day, Ben saw a discount on a haunted house. He didn't believe in ghost so he decided to go there and stay one night inside to prove there is no ghost in the reality. When he arrived, he met an old lady called Mrs. Rose. She had grey short hair and wearing an old fashioned dress and pearl necklace. She told Ben that she was the owner of the haunted house and then took him to look around the house. The house was tidy, neat and had a number of beautiful sculpture. Later after dinner, Mrs. Rose let Ben to settle in a room on the second floor . The temperature unexpectedly drop in the midnight, Ben was shivering when he woke up from a nightmare. He got off the bed and closed the window. Suddenly, the floorboard outside his room door was creaking. "Mrs. Rose?" Ben asked, " Are you there?" The sound stopped but no one answer him. He opened the door, no one outside the room and he found that the house only got one floor.