Practicing writing part 1 Most of the kindergarten children's parents are required to learn bilingual or trilingual in their early childhood. Most of the parents know that English is the one of most important language in the world. But, Mandarin is the one of important language as well now because both of languages gradually are the most spoken language globally. Thus, parents decide to start to leave their children to bilingual cram schools. The purpose of this research is to identify the success factors that the bilingual education is available for kindergarten children in Taiwan. Theoretical-based research is conducted to investigate the main effective reasons that how a bilingual education can benefit for kindergarten children. The effective reasons include paying focused attention without being distracted, increasing children's thinking skill and understanding the multilingual culture. Although it doesn’t mean there are no negative effects of bilingual education, a growing of research also suggests that a bilingual education can be more beneficial than traditional education for kindergarten children. Even if the advantages are few, it is worth to be found these advantages. please, help me to check the grammar and share some advice to me:) Thank you