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Hillary Clinton’s book, “What happened”
• In her book, the seems to blame everyone but herself for her loss, including Bernie Sanders, her rival during the primary. She accused him of portraying her as a corrupt corporatist who couldn’t be trusted, paving the way for Trump’s campaign.
• She also accused the internet where fake news about her were very harmful, as exemplified the story of a pizzeria where Clinton would have imprisoned child sex slaves.
• As far as her emails are concerned, she admitted that was a blunder but qualified by saying she broke no law, and accused the media to devote more time to her emails than to her entire policy.
• Thus, without these headwinds, she said she would probably have won, despite her shortcomings.
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Hillary Clinton’s book, “What happened”
• In her book, shr seems to blame everyone but herself for her loss, including Bernie Sanders who was her rival during the primary. She accused him of portraying her as a corrupt corporatist (restructure. it is not normal to use coporatust) who couldn’t be trusted, paving the way for Trump’s campaign.
• She also accused the internet of using "fake news" (not a real term/phrase. mainly used as of lately) about her like the story of "pizzeria" (do more research on the actual title of the scandal for the Clinton's organization) where Clinton would have imprisoned child sex slaves.
• As far as her emails are concerned, she admitted that was a blunder but expressed she broke no law and accused the media to devote more time to her emails than to her entire policy.
• She said she would have won, despite her shortcomings. (makes for stronger conclusion)
• In her book, shr seems to blame everyone but herself for her loss, including Bernie Sanders who was her rival during the primary. She accused him of portraying her as a corrupt corporatist (restructure. it is not normal to use coporatust) who couldn’t be trusted, paving the way for Trump’s campaign.
• She also accused the internet of using "fake news" (not a real term/phrase. mainly used as of lately) about her like the story of "pizzeria" (do more research on the actual title of the scandal for the Clinton's organization) where Clinton would have imprisoned child sex slaves.
• As far as her emails are concerned, she admitted that was a blunder but expressed she broke no law and accused the media to devote more time to her emails than to her entire policy.
• She said she would have won, despite her shortcomings. (makes for stronger conclusion)
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