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THIS IS THE LETTER THAT EXPLAINS WHY I WANT TO WORK WITH THIS COMPANY, HELP ME TO CORRECT IT PLEASE! The World Bank is one of the institutions around de world, where many people dreams working When I got my professional bachelor I started working in myself to get a position in this Company, so I improve my English level, after that I started a MBA. When I finished the MBA, I applied to World Bank, but finally I was no accepted. I worked in a new project in the company, I was working to develop the market in cities where The company hasn´t offices. It was a great experience for me, learn about the cities in my country and see the differences. Then I was the leader in Educative credits in Banco Pichincha. In this position I feel doing good things for many people, helping others to get educations and improve their and their family’s quality of live. When I did this job, we helped people around the country in some places where they didn´t have access to credits and high education, we worked with Universities with virtual education and together arrives to places like Montelibano, Arauca, San Andres, Leticia. We helped people who don´t have access to the financial system because they have informal activities like farming. During the last position in Banco Pichincha, I had the opportunity to meet the IFC work, we had some meetings to get resources for pyme and educative credits. During 2017 I worked trying to link the social activity with the educative credits, for this reason I worked with Unicef to promote the educative credits thinking in help the childrens in Choco, It was a good experience, the people loved what Pichincha was doing for the country. Today when I see this offer in Linkedin, I dream again, I would like work in a company where I can give opportunities to others and better if it is in my country. I have the knowledge and the expertise to develop this position, I know I need improve and learn new things, but I am sure If I get this opportunity I will give all my compromise and love for the job and the company.

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THIS IS THE LETTER THAT EXPLAINS WHY I WANT TO WORK FOR THIS COMPANY, HELP ME TO CORRECT IT PLEASE!

The World Bank is one of the institutions around the world that many people dream about working for.

When I got my Bachelor's degree I started working on getting a position in this company. After I improved the level of my English, I started with the MBA.

After I finished the MBA, I applied for the World Bank job, but I wasn't accepted.

I worked on a new project in a company where I was working with developing markets in the cities where that company doesn't have offices. It was a great experience for me to learn about the cities in my country and to see the differences.

After that I worked as an Educative credits leader in Banco Pichincha. In this position I helped people to get education and improve their and their families' quality of life.

Performing that position we helped people around the country especially the ones living in areas where they didn't have access to credits and high education. We worked with Universities using virtual education and together arrived to places like Montelibano, Arauca, San Andres, Leticia.

We helped people who don´t have access to the financial system as they perform informal activities like farming. (NOT SURE ABOUT THE MEANING OF THIS SENTENCE)

During my last position in Banco Pichincha, I had an opportunity to experience  working at the IFC. We had some meetings there to get resources for pyme and educative credits. (WHAT IS PYME?)

During 2017 I worked trying to link the social activity with the educative credits. For this reason I worked with Unicef to promote the educative credits with the intention of helping children in Choco. It was a good experience, the people loved what Pichincha was doing for the country.

Today when I see this offer in Linkedin, I dream again as I would like to work in a company where I could give opportunities to others and make things better in my country.

I have the knowledge and the expertise required for this position. I am aware that I need to improve and learn new things, but I am sure If I got this opportunity I would offer my dedication and love for the job and the company.

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