#002 Random Texts

I am using writingexercises.co.uk to generate random things and I write something to connect them.

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(Disappointment, Spider, Sandwich)

Daniel is a great boy, most of the time he is in a good mood and ready to help other people. He always says,  “If I can help, I must do it (to avoid repetition)”. Every day his mother makes him a sandwich to take to school, but she knows he never eats it. No matter what she tells him, he always gives it to the homeless/a homeless person/homeless people. She (but it would be better if you wrote "mother" here - to make the shift in perpectives (he-she) smoother) loves his kindness and at the same time she is afraid because he can easily get disappointed (even though you had a noun, it's better to use a derived adjective to convey the meaning of displeasure).

For example, when he was 4 years old, they (who they? it would be better to specify here, it's not very clear from the context) found a spider behind the shelf, which he didn’t want to kill (I've changed the structure a bit). So, they used the broom to put it outside the house. When his dad got home (no preposition needed), he said, “Look guys, there was a spider outside the house. I've killed it (present perfect required - there's a clear result of an action)”. Daniel cried for 3 days.

#002 Random Texts

I am using writingexercises.co.uk to generate random things and I write something to connect them.

instagram: @random_titles

(Disappointment, Spider, Sandwich)

Daniel is a great boy, in a good mood most of the time and ready to help other people. He always says, “If I can help, I must help”. Every day his mother makes him a sandwich to take to school, but she knows he never eats it. No matter what she tells him, he always gives it to a homeless person. She loves his kindness and at the same time she is afraid, because he can become easily disappointed.

For example, when he was 4 years old, he and his mother found a spider behind a shelf and he didn’t want to kill it, so they used the broom to put it outside the house. When his Dad got home, he said, “Look guys, there was a spider outside the house. I killed it.”  Daniel cried for three days.

What a neat type of exercise!