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I actually wanted to wear makeup, but my skin is so sensitive so I ended up not wearing makeup often.
(I was a little confused. I think your intention is:
"I actually want to wear makeup more, but my skin very sensitive, so I don't wear makeup often.")
And I wasn't going to wear makeup to work, but since my boss told me to wear makeup, so I have started to wear makeup to work.
I used to only apply the only sunscreen. But one day, a friend said that I should try a new BB cream from B company.
So I did and I thought it fitted me well.
(It fit me well = 마음에 들어요?
Saying "it fit/suits me well" only works with certain things. I think you should say "and I liked how it looked on me" here)
So now I've started wearing makeup much more often.
Comment: Nice!! Your writing is awesome. Keep improving :)
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