Cozy snow

It was snowing in the morning. It looks looked really cozy, even though I am was cold right through. at my nees.

When I was young I liked the snow. Snow made everything white.  makes all of area which I see white. I created my own world in winter and I played in the snow. played in the winter world that I made by snow. But as I got older getting older I realised that I didn't really like winter. Thus I don't didn't enjoy with  the snow much anymore.

I hate cold weather wheather. It makes me feel lazy more lazed out and I just want to stay in staying on my bed. The reason why I didn't like winter is I used to make my own artwork outside because it was large not small sculpture. Therefore almost student couldn't do it warm inside (I am not sure what you are trying to say with this sentence - sorry!).

Snow was flattering in this morning.  Everything All of area became white.

I passed out the road where the snow had  that snow was piled up. The feeling of stepping in the snow was refreshing fresh. It's been a long time since I have had such high feelings of hope and renewal. that I have a feelings of new heart and mind which gave me that there is hope and new start.

%% general note: you need to decide whether you are going to use the past tense or the present tense.  You are mixing up your tenses and it is a little confusing. I have put it all in the past tense so that it reads better and is more consistent.

*cold at my nees (knees) doesn't make sense in English.  You can say : the cold went right through me OR I was cold right through.  That means you were really really cold. 

But very well written!  A little poetic too.

Well done,

Katya

Cozy snow

It was snowing in the morning. It looks really cozy (cosy in UK English spelling), even though I am cold at my knees. [Not sure if you mean this? Not a common expression in English! You could say "you have cold knees" if your knees were cold]

When I was young I liked snow. Snow makes all of the area that which I see white. I played in the winter world that I made with by snow. But as I got was getting older I didn't really like winter. Thus I didn't enjoy with snow much anymore. I hate cold wheather. It makes me  feel lazy and want to more lazed out and just stay in on my bed. The reason why I didn't like winter is that I used to make my own artwork outside because it was not small sculpture (or "because they were large sculptures and I needed space"). Therefore almost student couldn't do it warm inside. [Not sure what this is meant to say... - could be "Therefore I got cold outside"]

Snow was flattering [falling?]  in this morning. All of the area became white.

I passed came out onto the road where the that snow was piled up. The feeling of stepping onto the snow was fresh. It's been a long time that since I have  had a feelings of new heart and mind which gave me ("belief" or "a feeling" ) that there is hope and new start.