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Things.i need edit. I am always melancholic person from my childhood. I always thinking the lonely and stars on sky... a quietly, twilight forest. People bored me. Sometimes i dont speak nobody. If you are in school, thias isnt unlikely. When you are depressed, people judge u. When you happy more than yesterday, people judge u again. Generally people judging you. You must be strong and be cool. You shouldnt hear or listen them. It s easy to say i know, important is what to be apply just like i cant. Hahah i think it was great sentence. Joke joke. I realized i have forgotten what i learned. Anywayyy. Dont fret. Or dont worries? I dont know i need help and correction. Ok, i am finishing in here. I have to sleep.

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Things I need to edit.

I have been a am always melancholic person from my childhood. I'm always thinking of things like the lonely and stars in the on sky, or a quietly, twilight forest. People bored me. Sometimes i dont speak to nobody. If you are in school, this isn't unlikely. When you are depressed, people judge you u. When you are happier happy more than yesterday, people judge you u again. In generally people judge  judging you. You must be strong and be cool. You shouldn't hear or listen to them. It's easy to say, I i know, important is what to be apply just like i cant. Ha hah i think that it was great sentence. Joke joke. I realized i have forgotten what i learned. Anyway. Don't fret or Or worry. worries? I don't know, but i need help and correction. OK, i am finishing in here. I have to sleep.

Notes: English does not used double negatives (I now know Spanish does!), so you can "speak to nobody" or "don't speak to anybody."

I don't understand the green section. Did you mean "... know, but it is important to do."?

Capitalize all "I's," because  you are talking about you, and you are important!

Light orange are misspellings. And I know many people use "u" for "you" but that is usually when they text. I hope. ;-)

Sounds like teenagers. They do judge a lot. I hope this helps. :-)

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Things I need to edit

I have always been a melancholic person from my childhood. I always thought about the lonely stars in the sky and quiet twilight forests. People bored me. Sometimes I don't speak to anybody. If you are in school, this isn't unlikely. When you are depressed, people judge you. When you are happier than yesterday, people judge you again.
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Things.i need edit.

I am always melancholic person from my childhood. I have always been a melancholic person/ I have been melancholic ever since I was a child/ ever since my childhood. I always thinking the lonely and stars on sky... a quietly, twilight forest. I am always thinking solitary thoughts about the stars in the sky above a quiet twilight forest. People bored me. People bore me. Sometimes i dont speak nobody. Sometimes I don't speak to anybody. If you are in school, this isn't unlikely. When you are depressed, people judge you. When you are happy more happier than yesterday, people judge you again. Generally people are always judging you. You must be strong and be cool. You shouldn't hear or listen to them. It's easy to say "I  know", important is what to be apply just like i cant but the important part is actually applying that advice, and I've never been able to do that. Hahah i think it  that was a great sentence. Joke joke. I realized i have forgotten what i learned. Anywayyy. Dont fret. Or dont worry? I dont know i need help and correction. Ok, i am finishing in here. I have to sleep.
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Hey, Alara can we practice spoken english over skype?
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what's so funny?

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