My note 02 (please correct) 1. Autumn is the ugliest season. 2. Despite the bad weather and gloomy atmosphere, this period of the year is likeable. 3. There is the time, when we can spend a lot of t

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My note 02 (please correct) 1. Autumn is the ugliest season. 2. Despite the bad weather and gloomy atmosphere, this period of the year is likeable. 3. There is the time, when we can spend a lot of time at home with family and rest. 4. In the city, there is a more peace because tourists left the city. 5. Many of my friends have birthday in October and November, so I can spend a good time at parties. 6. In Poland, we have a national holiday on 11 November. 7. Unfortunately, almost everyone catch cold because of bad weather. 8. This is also seazon of the largest expenditure for this one who have a children. 9. They hove to buy school textbooks and warmer clothes. 10. To sum up, I'm not surprised that major part of society is depressed in the autumn. Please correct, if you notice some mistakes. Thanks in advance.

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My note 02 (please correct)

1. Autumn is the ugliest season. Consider replacing ugliest with "worst".
2. Despite the bad weather and gloomy atmosphere, there is a lot to be liked in this period of the year.
3. This is the time, when we can spend a lot of time at home with family resting.
4. In the city, there is a more peaceful atmosphere because tourists have left the city.
5. Many of my friends have birthday in October and November, so I can have a good time at parties.
6. In Poland, we have a national holiday on 11 November.
7. Unfortunately, almost everyone catches a cold because of the bad weather.
8. This is also season of high expenditure for those that have children.
9. They have to buy school textbooks and warmer clothes.
10. To sum up, I'm not surprised that a major part of society is depressed in the autumn.

Please correct, if you notice some mistakes.
Thanks in advance.

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