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Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Class Nowadays,In China,more and more parents send their kids to art class because they think these class can make contribute to their children gain more ablity than others.Such as singing class,dancing class,language class and so on.But some people disagree that.For play is kids'narure but the art class may cost much time which make kids feel boring.What'worse,some parents even enforce kids to attend the art class they dislike which may leave children depression. So they appeal to parents to leave more for kids to play.In my opinion,I think kids are lively and naughty,parents shouldn't to limit their nature of play,at the same time,they can lead to their kids to find their interests and then appropriately send the kids to some art class. Only if kids like it ,they can find more happy in it .

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Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Class?

Nowadays,in China,more and more parents send their kids to art class, because they think these classes can make contribute to their them gain more ablity(/skills), compared to others.Such as singing class,dancing class,language classes, (and so on).But some people disagree with that. It is in children's narure to play, and the art class may take up much time, which could make children feel bored. What's worse, is that some parents even enforce kids to attend the art class they dislike, which may lead childreninto depression. So they advise parents in leaveing more for kids to play more.In my opinion,I think kids are lively and naughty,parents shouldn't to limit their nature of playing. At the same time,they can guide their kids in finding their interests and then appropriately send the kids to an art class. Only if kids like it ,they can be more happyattending.

You should either use 'in my oppinion' or 'i think'. They mean almost the same thing.

All in all, it was ok! Just practice more, and try writing shorter sentences.

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Yeah,I agree with you.I think some kind of class in school are cut off students'telent.School should provide mutiple directions for kids' development.
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In my opinion art classes are completely useless. As I was in school we always had to paint the pictures like the teacher wanted it to get good marks. That there are for example special painting characters are inside there and stuff. Also the same with music. I never understood if art in all of its kinds be it painting, singing or whatever is something of the taste why the hell a teacher can give you a bad mark just becaue he/she thinks it was not good altough other people like it? The special thing on art is that its just art and its nothing you should put a mark on. And its also stupid to force the kids to make art classes for example painting. What if they do not like it or just are not able to make good pictures like me? I had these problems in school and thats why I never liked these classes. Also in music I never liked the musics we had there because my taste of music was never inside it. To force children in school to be teached in art is to destroy their freedom, independence and maybe special their talents too.

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