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Hi Darya, really great job on your production. I've corrected a few minor mistakes that I found. Now you should be on your way to sounding more like a native speaker :) good job!
You've been dreaming about marriage for many years and finally you are sitting at your wedding reception with your spouse. You love him or her with all your heart and you can't imagine your live life without that person. But suddenly you start to think about your marriage and how what it is going to look like in several years. You start to remember all your friends who got divorced because of weight gain and you start to feel nervousness. So, what should you do to preserve your union and not to end your marriage like your friends? First of all, you'd think that you must respect one another and that that is the main secret of a happy marriage. And of course I'd say that you are right, because that is a really truly fact. Without respect your couple (sounds a little strange to my ears, I would say "a couple/couples" or
"you and your spouse") should be ready for failure, okay? The second thing that will help you to be happy in a marriage would be dealing with is having some common interests. Of course, you don't have to love everything that your spouse loves, but you both must love some little at least some of the same things. For example, you can be into horror films and horse-riding horseback riding, so you'd always have the chance to drive care gallop (?) away (to watch some horror films about horses, why not? C: ). So, after going to the cinema maybe you'd like to go home, and when you finally went inside the house you'd understand realize that you've got some household chores. That would be the time to divide your responsibilities, because if you'd be were to be cleaning the house while your spouse would be was sleeping or having fun when while you did all the 'dirty job work', you'd be thinking about divorce.
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