my little script, can you please correct me?
can you please help me to correct the following script written for my target language which is english i speak spanish
What's your job?
worked as a service salesman in a Texaco Fuel Station dispatching fuel (gasoline)
what do or did you study?
I graduated from college
what do you do for fun?
I like to listen to rock, to read about psychology and self improvement, to go out with my friends or girlfriend, to watch videos on youtube
where you're from?
I am from Colombia I live in Medellin
why you are learning this language?
because I like the culture and I think it is very useful to continue learning more about psychology, I would like to travel someday to united states
how long have you been learning it?
shortly less than a month approximately
anything interesting about yourself?
I have a good sense of humor, I am honest, grateful, humble, with a strong will, spontaneous, responsible, worker I like risks and look for new emotions, I am a liberal challenge traditional values if they are not useful, relaxed, I live in the moment and I do what feels good now, I do not like to complicate myself with ideas, I am more oriented to the facts, I am willing to think about the possibilities before acting
how old are you?
I am twenty two years old
with whom you live?
I live with my mom my stepfather and my two younger brothers
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What's your job?
worked as a service salesman in a Texaco Fuel Station dispatching fuel (gasoline)
what do/did you study?
I graduated from college (Specify the faculty or subject that you have studied. They ask ”What” did you study, not what is your highest level of education achieved)
what do you do for fun?
I like to listen to rock music, to read about psychology and self improvement, to go out with my friends or my girlfriend, to watch videos on youtube
where you're are you from?
I am from Colombia. I live in Medellin
why you are learning this language?
because I like the culture and I think it is very useful to continue learning more about psychology, I would like to travel someday to the United States of America (or U.S.A.)
how long have you been learning it?
approximately shortly less than a month
anything interesting about yourself?
I have a good sense of humor, I am honest, grateful, humble, with a strong willpower, spontaneous, responsible worker. I like taking risks and looking for new emotions, I am a liberal and I challenge traditional values if they are not useful. I am relaxed, I live in the moment and I do what feels good to me now, I don't like to complicate myself with ideas, I am more oriented to the facts, I am willing to think about the possibilities before acting
how old are you?
I am twenty two years old
with whom you live?
I live with my mom, my stepfather and my two younger brothers
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