My diary please correction ! Today I waked up at 9:00 am.I baked a simple bread for my family that tasted only wheet and salt on the first time!It was not bad, but the center of it was not baked well.

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My diary please correction ! Today I waked up at 9:00 am.

I baked a simple bread for my family that tasted only wheet and salt on the first time!

It was not bad, but the center of it was not baked well.

My father said Yeast didn't work well.

I want to bake it well!

And, I studied English at coffee.

I'm studying English of TOEIC that is measure of understanding English.

My score is 650 now and my goal of this is 750.

After I worked at ''YAKINIKU'' restaurant.

The work was very hard and I hate my college very much!!

After I'm writing this now.

I'll go to bed soon.

Goodnight.

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Today, I woke up at 9:00 A.M.

I baked a simple bread recipe for my family, (that used only wheat and salt?).

The center of the bread was a little doughy, but it tasted fine enough.

My father told me that the problem was that the yeast wasn't active.

I want to become a better baker.

Then, I studied English at a coffee shop.

I am studying to pass my TOEIC exam.

My current score is a 650, but I want to get a 750.

After I finished studying, I went to work at a Yakiniku restaurant.

Work was exhausting. Also, I totally hate college.

And I am writing this now.

I'm going to bed soon.

Goodnight.

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