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About Victor Tsoi
Listening to his songs it seems that he felt his own premature departure.
There are much more documentary films and programs about him than interviews with him.
The only way to know about him is to listening to his songs.
Who was he? The fan of night and rain? Bores romantic?
Why do still people love him? Maybe because he is distinctive or maybe he is one of us?
We are waiting for everyone who is intrested in Victor Tsoi's creations. Today on the jam-session we will perform his songs and talk about his oeuvres.
Expression of gratitude
We thank Tom for his engrossing stories about our region. Creative people deserve to move further and we wish him good luck in his creative path.
Our congratulations to Ann and Tom who won small presents from International Youth Center.
Follow us and continue to attend our activities. We always are happy to see you here.
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About Victor Tsoi
Listening to his songs it seems that he felt his own premature departure.
There aremuch far more documentaries films and programs about him than interviews with him.
The only way to knowabout him is to listening to his songs.
Who was he? The fan of night and rain?Bores Born or Boring romantic?
Why do people still love him? Maybe because he is distinctive or maybe he is one of us (like us)?
We are waiting for everyone who is intrested in Victor Tsoi's creations (I don't understand). Today on the jam-session (is this a name of a show or a daily event?) we will perform his songs and talk about hisoeuvres works.
Expression of gratitude
We thank Tom for his engrossing stories about our region. Creative people deserve to move further in life? and we wish him good luck in his creative path.
Our congratulations to Ann and Tom who won small presents from International Youth Center.
Follow us and continue to attend our activities. We always are happy to see you here.
Is this for a radio broadcast?
Listening to his songs it seems that he felt his own premature departure.
There are
The only way to know
Who was he? The fan of night and rain?
Why do people still love him? Maybe because he is distinctive or maybe he is one of us (like us)?
We are waiting for everyone who is intrested in Victor Tsoi's creations (I don't understand). Today on the jam-session (is this a name of a show or a daily event?) we will perform his songs and talk about his
Expression of gratitude
We thank Tom for his engrossing stories about our region. Creative people deserve to move further in life? and we wish him good luck in his creative path.
Our congratulations to Ann and Tom who won small presents from International Youth Center.
Follow us and continue to attend our activities. We always are happy to see you here.
Is this for a radio broadcast?
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