The Mystical Traveler
Hello, I would be thankful if you correct my translation about Grammar, Punctuation etc.
The mystical traveler has choose one of the session's members in order to more meeting and deeper friendship in the out of the session during a week after telling to their master and his approval.
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Needs to be split as it’s a little long, and doesn’t quite read correctly.
The mystical traveler has to chose one of the session's members in order to hold more meetings and enjoy a deeper friendship both within and outside the session. He does this during a week, after consulting with their master and gaining his approval.
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The Mystical Traveler
Hello, I would be thankful if you corrected my translation about Grammar, Punctuation etc. my grammar and pyunctuation in the following translation. Sentences with "if" have weird grammar. Since you said "would", you are using conditional 2, so the other clause needs to be in past subjunctive. https://www.ef.edu/english-resources/english-grammar/conditional/The mystical traveler has choose one of the session's members in order to more meeting and deeper friendship in the out of the session during a week after telling to their master and his approval.
I'd need more context to completely understand your sentence, but I'd probably do something like this:
After asking their master and gaining his approval, the mystical traveler chose one of the session's members, and entered into a much deeper friendship with that person, meeting with him (or her) constantly over the course of a week.
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Thank you.
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By the way, the last line, "and gaining his approval or wining his approval
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Hello, I would be thankful if you correct my translation about Grammar, Punctuation etc.
The mystical traveler has chosen one of the session's members in order to have more meetings and enjoy deeper friendship both in and out of the session during a week after telling that to their master and his approval.
The mystical traveler has chosen one of the session's members in order to have more meetings and enjoy deeper friendship both in and out of the session during a week after telling that to their master and his approval.
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