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Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would
you go about writing it?
Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand this.

My favorite food is Katsudon/This is a complete sentence but if you wanted to connect this sentence to the next one you could say "My favorite food is Katsudon and it is quite a popular Japanese food( maybe try using the word dish instead), in particular with the men. I’ve been eating it since I was a boy. It is a bowl of rice topped with a deep-fried pork cutlet, egg, vegetable, and condiments.

I eat it once a week at the Katsuya restaurant, which is a chains restaurant in Japan. Surprisingly, there are restaurants in Korea, Taiwan, Hong Kong and Thailand.( I'm not sure what you were trying to say here. Did you mean that Katsuya is in Korea, Taiwan, Hong Kong and Thailand?)  

This restaurant serves chicken foods as well. I like that their eggs are soft and juicy. They have a nice aroma. 

I guess that the food is getting much more popular many more throughout the next year. The food memes me getting full.(lol)

Hi. My name is Jyadon. I think that you did a good job with details but you need to be more specific and have more nouns in your sentences instead or using "it" all the time, just so that the reader or the person you're talking to can clearly understand what you're talking about. I suggest that you learn a little more about pronouns and their plural forms. With more practice, I'm sure that you'll be able to convey your thoughts about your favorite restaurant and dish without any problems. : )

Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would you go about writing it? Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand this.

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My favorite food, Katsudon, is a quite popular Japanese meal, in particularly with men. I’ve been eating it since when I was a boy. It is a bowl of rice topped with a deep-fried pork cutlet, egg,vegetables, and condiments. I eat once in a week at the Katsuya restaurant which is a chains restaurant in Japan. Surprisingly, these restaurants are also in Korea, Taiwan, Hong Kong and Thailand. This restaurant serves chicken dishes as well. I like the eggs that are soft and juicy. They have a nice aroma. I guess that the food will get more popular next year. The food makes memes me getting full.