Mom don't be sick '(
Mommy is my best friend.
She is a blessed from abovr, she bring joy to my soul, and pleasure to my eyes.
I feel so bad when my mom hurts or bain make her suffering.
Mom don't be sick ur daughter can not hold on, I can't see her in that way, my heart broken up and there's nothing in my hand, midecin is recover her but sometimes it's not.
I want to see my mom's smile, my mom laugh, my happy mom.
Oh God I pray to make mommy feel better, she is my treasure and I want to see her happy all times all ways.
Mommy don't worry you will be okay tomorow :) !
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Mom don't be sick '(
Mommy is my best friend.She is a blessed blessing from above; she bring joy to my soul, and pleasure to my eyes.
I feel so bad when my mom hurts or bain? make her suffering.suffers.
Mom don't be sick. Your ur daughter cannot hold on, I can't see you (You began the sentence addressing your mom) her in that way. My heart is broken up and there's nothing in my hand, midecin is recover her but sometimes it's not. (I'm not sure what you are trying to say here; perhaps: "...there's no medicine I can give you.")
I want to see my mom's smile, my mom's laugh -- my happy mom.
Oh God, I pray to make mommy feel better; she is my treasure and I want to see her happy all the times all ways.
Mommy don't worry; you will be okay tomorrow (spelling) :) !
It's a lovely piece of writing. Mom's are wonderful. :-)
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Mom don't be sick :'(
Mommy is my best friend.She is a blessing from above; she brings joy to my soul, and pleasure to my eyes.
I feel so bad when my mom is hurt or her brain makes her suffer.
Mom, don't be sick, your daughter can not hold on. I can't see her in that way, my heart is broken up and there's nothing in my hand. Medicine helps her recover but sometimes it doesn't.
I want to see my mom's smile, my mom's laugh, my happy mom.
Oh God, I pray to make mommy feel better, she is my treasure and I want to see her happy, all times, all ways.
Mommy don't worry, you will be okay tomorow! :)
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