What a lovely day

Last week, my family and I went on a trip. We had a great time. By the time we arrived at the beach, my uncle's family had arrived as well. I was so happy and excited to spend time with my cousins. At the beginning, we had started to put up our tent when a huge wave came and ruined everything, so we had to change our location to another for safety. While my cousin and I were walking by the beach, we suddenly saw something in the water. We walked toward it, but it disappeared and we could not figure it out. (I would change up the wording here a bit, perhaps to something like "we could not figure out what it was" or "we could not figure out what it had been"!) After that we enjoyed a nice meal which had been made by my uncle's wife. (Maybe change this around to "made by my uncle's wife", "cooked by my uncle's wife", etc) Finally, we went home and as soon as we arrived at the house, I fell asleep. It was a nice trip. I hope we can make it again.

Hopefully this is of some help! (: