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A Suggestion Letter Of School I'm writing this letter to suggest you some methods to improve students' physical conditon as the most of students do not pay much attention to thier health condition nowadays. The primary methods of my suggestion are as follow. Firstly, the school should take some expenditure to construct more infrastructure for the students to practice. Secondly, the teacher should also emphasize the importance of physical condition during his or her teaching. Thirdly, food also matters, the school canteen should provide more delicious and healthy food. Hope you will adopt my suggestion.

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A Suggestion Letter to a School

I'm writing this letter to suggest you some methods to improve students' physical condition as the most of students do not pay much attention to their health condition nowadays.
The primary methods of my suggestion are as follows. Firstly, the school should take some expenditure to construct more infrastructure for the students to practice. Secondly, the teacher should also emphasize the importance of physical condition during his or her teaching. Thirdly, food also matters. The school canteen should provide more delicious and healthy food.
I hope you will adopt my suggestions.


"Expenditure" is a bit awkward here. You could say, "allocate some funds" instead.

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