The Divine Blessing Hello, could you please correct my translation in an academic style( Grammar, punctuation, extra words etc), Thanks "They, their" here refers to any person can be he/she. all of the usage of "when" refers to " that time the divine blessing will become visible to them that they do 1 2 3 4 ... ............................................................................................................................................................................................................. When mystical traveler acts according to their duty and does not transgress, the divine blessing will become visible to them; and, when they dedicate their thought to knowing himself, putting away the shadowy and luminous veils. When they get the benefit of the recitation of God's names' session of comrades and when they consider the intention and activities of the session's members in correctitude and when makes their friendship sincere for them.