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help! A heated debate has arisen recently concerning to whether we should take part-time jobs during school days. Some proponents believe that taking part-time jobs can not only earn the money, but gain skills and experiences needed in future. However, the opposing view insists that the priority of a student is his academic studying, and meanwhile part-time jobs’ disadvantages outweigh its advantages in general. From my perspective, I am in favor of the proponents’ idea. Firstly, there is no doubt that we cannot concentrate on two things at the same time. In our daily lives, we may be easily distracted by other entertainments while studying. So this is true to the relation between study and work. Secondly, It is not worthy of giving up our academic careers due to it. As the results we can predict that Taking part-time jobs may lead to some disruptive consequences, such as absenting from lessons, losing interests to study, even worse, losing the degree diploma. Most importantly, the core of study is to learn how to learn, this is a world that attaches great importance to efficiency, and meanwhile benefits learning can bring are intangible and lifelong, which we can learn from it to shape our personalities that is significant to our future success. In conclusion, I strongly hold the view that we should not take part-time jobs during school days, as learning can certainly guide us to experience a new world, and we would definitely be grateful for it in the future.

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Is A Part-Time Job Compatible With Full-Time Study?

Recently, there has arisen a heated debate over whether it is wise to take part-time employment around our studies. Some proponents strongly believe that by taking part-time jobs they can not only earn money, but also gain the skills and experience valued by future employers. Counteracting this argument is the view that insists the priority for a student should be to devote his or her time to academic study. What is more, the disadvantages of a part-time job generally outweigh the advantages. From my perspective, I favour the opposition view. Firstly, there is no doubt it is difficult to give your full attention to two tasks at the same time. A prime example would be how easy it is to become distracted by loud music whilst trying to study. The same could be said for the relationship between study and work. Secondly, it is not worth gambling with our academic careers. Findings go to prove that taking on part-time jobs can lead to disruptive influences such absences from lessons, losing interest in your studies and, worse still, failing to achieve the degree diploma standard. Most importantly, the core component of study is to learn how to learn. The benefits of learning are often intangible but also lifelong. Crucially, the acquisition of knowledge can help shape our individual personality, something which is hugely significant to our future success. By way of conclusion, I strongly hold the view that we should refrain from taking part-time jobs when our prime task is to study to the best of our ability. Focusing on learning to the exclusion of all else can certainly guide us to experience a new world, one we would be forever grateful for in the future.

 

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