English expression
I wrote down some English grammer in a for a while.
久しぶりに文章をかいた。I was successful to reduce my weight by 5 kg.
私は5キロ痩せる事に成功した。
She reduced her wight more than 10kg so she looking good now.
彼女は10キロ以上減量し、今は綺麗になった。
Perhaps you should reduce amont of alcohol you drink.
あなたはお酒の量を減らしてみてはいかがですか？
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Hi Yasuyuki,
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Cheers,
Ashley
English expression
I wrote down some English grammar in a for a while.久しぶりに文章をかいた。I was successful to reduce in reducing my weight by 5 kg.
私は5キロ痩せる事に成功した。
She reduced her weight more than 10kg so she looking good now looks better now.
彼女は10キロ以上減量し、今は綺麗になった。
Perhaps you should reduce the amount of alcohol you drink.
あなたはお酒の量を減らしてみてはいかがですか？
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