Please check my letter of application :)
Dear Mr. Jeffrey,
I saw your advertisement in the newspaper and I interested in position of part-time assistant.
I'm twenty one years old and I'm looking for a part-time job because I'm studying at university for now and want to earn so money.
I have an experience in working at music stor for one year. In addition to that I'm studying at Musical Unuversity, therefore I love music a lot and I think that I will be able to do any work at your store successfully.
I have a few questions for you: how many hours is supposed to work per day and what salary do you offer including my experience?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Maria
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Hi Katherine,
I've highlighted the corrections I would make. Good luck with your application!
I saw your advertisement in the newspaper and I am interested in the position of part-time assistant.
I'm I am twenty one 21 years old and I'm I am looking for a part-time job because while I am in school. I'm studying at university for now and want to earn so money.
I have an experience in working in at a music store for one year. In addition to that, I'm I am studying at Musical University, and have a passion for music. I believe my passion and knowledge of music will make me a successful employee at your store. therefore I love music a lot and I think that I will be able to do any work at your store successfully.
I have a few questions for you: how many hours is supposed would you require me to work per day? And what salary do canyou offer including my experience?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Maria
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Please check my letter of application :)
Dear Mr. Jeffrey,I saw your advertisement in the newspaper and I am interested in the position of part-time assistant.
I'm twenty one years old and I'm looking for a part-time job because I'm studying at university for now and want to earn some money.
I have
I have a few questions for you: how many hours am I supposed to work per day and what salary do you offer including my experience?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Maria
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