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IELTS- Part Time Job Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my interesting in a part time job in sales field. My name is John Micheal, I am 21 years old. I am studying Marketing in Mahareshi University for business, I have been studying there for 3 years. I have token many courses in marketing and sales. I have a good experience in sales. After I left the secondary school , I worked at mobile accessories shop. I worked also for cars agent. I was responsible about selling Kia Optima car at showroom . You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. , --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- About me, you will find me as an active member in the sales team. I have desirable to achieve my goals. I have enough patient to deal with customer, understand their needs and show products specification to them. All these positively affect achieving my sales target. I look forward to hearing from you soon. I would be thankful if you could arrange interview to tell you more about my skills and experience. Yours Sincerely, John

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my interesting in a part time job position in sales.

My name is John Micheal and I am 21 years old. I am studying business marketing in Mahareshi University and have been studying there for 3 years. I have taken many courses in marketing and sales.

I have good sales experience. After I left secondary school, I worked at a mobile accessories shop.
I also worked for a car agency and was responsible for selling Kia Optima cars at its showroom.

About me: You will find me an active member in the sales team. I have a strong desire to achieve my goals. I have enough patience to deal with customers, understand their needs, and show product specifications to them. All these skills positively affect me in achieving my sales target.

I look forward to hearing from you soon. I would be thankful if you could arrange an interview to tell you more about my skills and experience.

Yours Sincerely,
John

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IELTS- Part Time Job

Dear Sir/Madam,


I am writing to express my interest in a part time job in sales field.

My name is John Micheal and I am 21 years old. I am studying Marketing in Mahareshi University for business, I have been studying there for 3 years. I have taken many courses in marketing and sales.

I have good experience in sales. After I left  secondary school , I worked at mobile accessories shop.
I worked also for a cars agent. I was responsible for selling the Kia Optima car at showroom .
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You are looking for a part-time job.

Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter,

introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like
and say what experience and skills you have

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ................. ,
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------


About me, you will find me as an active member in the sales team. I have a desire to achieve my goals. I have enough patience to deal with customers, understand their needs and show product specifications to them. All these positively affect achieving my sales target.

I look forward to hearing from you soon. I would be thankful if you could arrange an interview to tell you more about my skills and experience.

Yours Sincerely,
John

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