My English Diary(Feel free correct my compostion)
Today is Sunday, What a lovely day! With warm sunshine. And nice tempreture. I had two dance classes today. It is pole dance. I finished my lunch at a small resturant. The rice noodle is my lunch. After that, I went to DEE dance studio which is my dancing place. First, we trained our basic skills. Such as turn around head, turn around breast , turn around hip. That is not difficult. Next, our teacher teach us one kind of dance. That is a so sexy dance. Very beautiful. Finally we finished our dance class. I went to home had a rest. I am also learning Dutch. But when I just touched my bed. I feel so sleepy. Unfortunately, I went to sleep instead of learn Dutch.
I woke up at five clock. Around six forty, I still had a dance class. Therefor I cooked my dinner as soon as possible. I watched some basic Dutch video via Youtube while I was eating. The Dutch video told me a funny appearance. "Italian man try every times with a woman which they first meet" Sorry I don't remember exactly.But it told us Italian man like shows they love every woman when they meet first time. Is it funny? Ok, I had to go to my dance class at that time.And I have to go to bed now. See you guys next time.
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My English Diary(Feel free correct my compostion)
Today is Sunday, What a lovely day! With warm sunshine. And nice tempreture temperature. I had two dance classes today. It is pole dancing. I finished my lunch at a small resturant restaurant. The rice noodle is my lunch My lunch was rice noodles. After that, I went to the DEE dance studio which is my dancing place where I dance. First, we trained our basic skills. Such as turn around head, turn around breast , turn around hip. That is not difficult. Next, our teacher teach taught us one kind of dance. That is a so very sexy dance. Very beautiful. Finally we finished our dance class. I went to home and had a rest. I am also learning Dutch. But when I just as soon as I touched my bed, I feel felt so sleepy. Unfortunately, I went to sleep fell asleep instead of learn Dutch.I woke up at five clock. Around six forty, I still had a dance class. Therefore I cooked my dinner as soon quickly as possible. I watched some basic Dutch videos via Youtube while I was eating. The Dutch video told taught me a funny appearance phrase(?). "Italian man men try every times with a woman which they first meet" Sorry I don't remember exactly.But it told us when Italian man like shows they fall in love with every woman when they meet first time as soon as they meet. Is it funny? Ok, I had to go to my dance class at that time.And I have to go to bed now. See you guys next time.
You've mixed up the present and past tense a few times. And try not to write such short sentences. E.g.: As soon as I touched my bed I felt so sleepy that I fell asleep instead of learning Dutch.
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I love dancing it was one of my favorite activities when I go to the gym. I am not a professional dancer but I like it. As I always say music has a supernatural power on us and dancing is the way to express ourselves. Lucky you.
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