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all my trips were wonderful. I tell you about my last vacation. It was in June of 2017 year. I went to Cannes, but the first place where I went was Vienna. i had transplantation in Vienna. I was Vienna 12 hours. in Vienna I went on the tourist track. Vienna is very beautiful and clean city. center city was small and I bypassed all for ten hours. in Vienna I taste sausage and Vienna's gulasch-it was very delicious. I wanted to go in tchaikovsky's concerto, but consenrto was start when I shoulded to fly in France. in cannes a long time i couldn't find hotel. a lot of people didnt know where this street. and only policeman was know. in hotel located in small street. it was old building of 18 century. i had small room, but beautiful and there was all necessary. cannes was beautiful and white city. there is a lot of old, beautiful buildings. building where is film's festival was sad, gray and don't luxsuary. sea was very cold and deep. cannes was Italy's region when something. and now in cannes and in nice live a lot of Italian people. and this region locate a lot of Italian food restaurant. one day I went to nice and monaco. Monaco was unremarkable city. thus city have four attractions, in nice not too many attractions.At the end of my trip, I was in Milan. I really liked the Cathedral of Milan. In Italy amazingly delicious croissants and tomatoes. During this period there were big summer discount so the city I had not seen. In Milan I had a long day and the next morning i flew back. I was very pleased with my journey
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All my trips were wonderful. I will tell you about my last vacation. It was in June, 2017. I went to Cannes, but the first place where I went was Vienna. I had a stopover in Vienna and was there for 12 hours. There I went on the tourist trail. Vienna is a very beautiful and clean city. The city centre was small and I spent all my ten hours there. In Vienna I ate sausage and Vienna's gulasch and they were delicious. I wanted to go to Ttchaikovsky's concert, but it was started when I should fly to France. In Ccannes for a long time I couldn't find my hotel. A lot of people didnt know where this street was and only a policeman knew. The hotel was located in a small street. It was an old building of the 18th century. I had a small room, but beautiful and there were all necessities. Ccannes was a beautiful and white city. Tthere were a lot of old, beautiful buildings but the building where was the film festival was sad, gray and not luxurious. The sea was very cold and deep. Ccannes was once in Italy, and now many nice Italians live there and this region has a lot of Italian restaurants. Oone day I went to Nnice and Mmonaco. Monaco was an unremarkable city. It has four attractions and in Nnice are not too many attractions. At the end of my trip, I was in Milan. I really liked Milan Cathedral. In Italy are amazingly delicious croissants and tomatoes. During this period there were big summer discounts such that I had not seen before. In Milan I had a long day and the next morning I flew back. I was very pleased with my journey.Very well written!
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All my trips were wonderful. I will tell you about my last vacation. It was in June of 2017. I went to Cannes, but the first place where I went was Vienna. I had transplantation in Vienna. I was in Vienna for 12 hours. I went on the tourist track. Vienna is very beautiful and clean city. The center of the city was small and I bypassed all only for ten hours. In Vienna I tasted sausage and Vienna's gulasch, it was very delicious. I wanted to go in Tchaikovsky's concerto, but concerto already started when I shoulded to fly from France. In Cannes, icouldn't find hotel for a long time. Theres a lot of people didnt know where is this street, and the policeman only was know. The hotel located in small street. It was old building of 18 century. I had small room but beautiful and there was all necessary. Cannes was beautiful and white city. There is a lot of old and beautiful buildings. The building where the film's festival held was sad, gray and don't luxuary. The sea was very cold and deep. Cannes was Italy's region and now there's a lot of Italian people, and this region locate a lot of Italian food restaurant. One day I went to Venice and Monaco. Monaco was unremarkable city. This city have four attractions. At the end of my trip, I was in Milan. I really like the Cathedral of Milan. In Italy, there's amazingly delicious croissants and tomatoes. During this period, there were big summer discount in the city I had not seen. In Milan, I had a long day and the next morning i flew back. I was very pleased with my journey.
All my trips were wonderful. I will tell you about my last vacation. It was in June of 2017. I went to Cannes, but the first place where I went was Vienna. I had transplantation in Vienna. I was in Vienna for 12 hours. I went on the tourist track. Vienna is very beautiful and clean city. The center of the city was small and I bypassed all only for ten hours. In Vienna I tasted sausage and Vienna's gulasch, it was very delicious. I wanted to go in Tchaikovsky's concerto, but concerto already started when I shoulded to fly from France. In Cannes, icouldn't find hotel for a long time. Theres a lot of people didnt know where is this street, and the policeman only was know. The hotel located in small street. It was old building of 18 century. I had small room but beautiful and there was all necessary. Cannes was beautiful and white city. There is a lot of old and beautiful buildings. The building where the film's festival held was sad, gray and don't luxuary. The sea was very cold and deep. Cannes was Italy's region and now there's a lot of Italian people, and this region locate a lot of Italian food restaurant. One day I went to Venice and Monaco. Monaco was unremarkable city. This city have four attractions. At the end of my trip, I was in Milan. I really like the Cathedral of Milan. In Italy, there's amazingly delicious croissants and tomatoes. During this period, there were big summer discount in the city I had not seen. In Milan, I had a long day and the next morning i flew back. I was very pleased with my journey.
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Here is my correction. Please correct me if i'm wrong ^^
All my trips were wonderful. I will tell you about my last vacation. It was in June of 2017. I went to Cannes, but the first place where I went was Vienna. I had transplantation in Vienna. I was in Vienna for 12 hours. I went on the tourist track. Vienna is very beautiful and clean city. The center of the city was small and I bypassed all only for ten hours. In Vienna I tasted sausage and Vienna's gulasch, it was very delicious. I wanted to go in Tchaikovsky's concerto, but concerto already started when I shoulded to fly from France. In Cannes, icouldn't find hotel for a long time. Theres a lot of people didnt know where is this street, and the policeman only was know. The hotel located in small street. It was old building of 18 century. I had small room but beautiful and there was all necessary. Cannes was beautiful and white city. There is a lot of old and beautiful buildings. The building where the film's festival held was sad, gray and don't luxuary. The sea was very cold and deep. Cannes was Italy's region and now there's a lot of Italian people, and this region locate a lot of Italian food restaurant. One day I went to Venice and Monaco. Monaco was unremarkable city. This city have four attractions. At the end of my trip, I was in Milan. I really like the Cathedral of Milan. In Italy, there's amazingly delicious croissants and tomatoes. During this period, there were big summer discount in the city I had not seen. In Milan, I had a long day and the next morning i flew back. I was very pleased with my journey.
All my trips were wonderful. I will tell you about my last vacation. It was in June of 2017. I went to Cannes, but the first place where I went was Vienna. I had transplantation in Vienna. I was in Vienna for 12 hours. I went on the tourist track. Vienna is very beautiful and clean city. The center of the city was small and I bypassed all only for ten hours. In Vienna I tasted sausage and Vienna's gulasch, it was very delicious. I wanted to go in Tchaikovsky's concerto, but concerto already started when I shoulded to fly from France. In Cannes, icouldn't find hotel for a long time. Theres a lot of people didnt know where is this street, and the policeman only was know. The hotel located in small street. It was old building of 18 century. I had small room but beautiful and there was all necessary. Cannes was beautiful and white city. There is a lot of old and beautiful buildings. The building where the film's festival held was sad, gray and don't luxuary. The sea was very cold and deep. Cannes was Italy's region and now there's a lot of Italian people, and this region locate a lot of Italian food restaurant. One day I went to Venice and Monaco. Monaco was unremarkable city. This city have four attractions. At the end of my trip, I was in Milan. I really like the Cathedral of Milan. In Italy, there's amazingly delicious croissants and tomatoes. During this period, there were big summer discount in the city I had not seen. In Milan, I had a long day and the next morning i flew back. I was very pleased with my journey.
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Here is my correction. Please correct me if i'm wrong ^^
All my trips were wonderful. I will tell you about my last vacation. It was in June of 2017. I went to Cannes, but the first place where I went was Vienna. I had transplantation in Vienna. I was in Vienna for 12 hours. I went on the tourist track. Vienna is very beautiful and clean city. The center of the city was small and I bypassed all only for ten hours. In Vienna I tasted sausage and Vienna's gulasch, it was very delicious. I wanted to go in Tchaikovsky's concerto, but concerto already started when I shoulded to fly from France. In Cannes, icouldn't find hotel for a long time. Theres a lot of people didnt know where is this street, and the policeman only was know. The hotel located in small street. It was old building of 18 century. I had small room but beautiful and there was all necessary. Cannes was beautiful and white city. There is a lot of old and beautiful buildings. The building where the film's festival held was sad, gray and don't luxuary. The sea was very cold and deep. Cannes was Italy's region and now there's a lot of Italian people, and this region locate a lot of Italian food restaurant. One day I went to Venice and Monaco. Monaco was unremarkable city. This city have four attractions. At the end of my trip, I was in Milan. I really like the Cathedral of Milan. In Italy, there's amazingly delicious croissants and tomatoes. During this period, there were big summer discount in the city I had not seen. In Milan, I had a long day and the next morning i flew back. I was very pleased with my journey.
All my trips were wonderful. I will tell you about my last vacation. It was in June of 2017. I went to Cannes, but the first place where I went was Vienna. I had transplantation in Vienna. I was in Vienna for 12 hours. I went on the tourist track. Vienna is very beautiful and clean city. The center of the city was small and I bypassed all only for ten hours. In Vienna I tasted sausage and Vienna's gulasch, it was very delicious. I wanted to go in Tchaikovsky's concerto, but concerto already started when I shoulded to fly from France. In Cannes, icouldn't find hotel for a long time. Theres a lot of people didnt know where is this street, and the policeman only was know. The hotel located in small street. It was old building of 18 century. I had small room but beautiful and there was all necessary. Cannes was beautiful and white city. There is a lot of old and beautiful buildings. The building where the film's festival held was sad, gray and don't luxuary. The sea was very cold and deep. Cannes was Italy's region and now there's a lot of Italian people, and this region locate a lot of Italian food restaurant. One day I went to Venice and Monaco. Monaco was unremarkable city. This city have four attractions. At the end of my trip, I was in Milan. I really like the Cathedral of Milan. In Italy, there's amazingly delicious croissants and tomatoes. During this period, there were big summer discount in the city I had not seen. In Milan, I had a long day and the next morning i flew back. I was very pleased with my journey.
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